Off in Hell
Everything around me was burning,I had behind me a line of scared and worried people.
A red man approached me and said, "my dear, you are in hell"
I couldnt believe it!.
Then I started to hear a repetitive noise, it was like a knock knock, and a distant voice was telling me you get 2 hours! It was the voice of my little brother! I opened my eyes and saw a bottle of shampoo.I was surrounded by bubbles and submerged in hot water.
My brother told me that I had already finished my relaxing bath. But my bath had been nothing relaxed, I had been to hell!
Teresa Castellano Gasca.
I like this story. It has a good ending. And I like the irony that makes the "relaxing" bath not relaxing at all. Good job. Although there are some grammar mistakes.
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